The film crew advertised a casting call for the romantic comedy. The director and producer wanted a man and a woman in their early twenties. The stars had to be attractive. Yet they could not be conventionally handsome or pretty. The tryouts began. The director grew frustrated. The good actors looked too conventional. The actors who looked right performed without distinction. The director would have to compromise her vision. She knew that. Nevertheless, she issued another casting call. She even searched the local universities for undiscovered talent.
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