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Here is a sample edited paragraph. Corrections are noted in bold:
Tina wants to travel, but she can never get time off from her job at Jesse's Cafe. If she plans a trip, Jesse begs her to stay. Jesse says, "You'd be gone during the busy season. If you left me with all the work then, I'd go crazy." But if there were a slow season at Jesse's cafe, Tina would not know about it. Tina's friends think that if she does not quit her job, she will never be able to travel. Anna says, "If you had quit last month, you could have gone to Florida with me." Sophie says, "If you quit now, you could go to California with me next week." Anna and Sophie think that if they plan a trip to Africa next summer, Tina may finally quit her job and join them. If Tina had known how difficult Jesse could be, she would not have gone to work for him.
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