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28.2 More on Coordination and Subordination

The following paragraph is full of short, choppy sentences, many of which should be coordinated or subordinated into longer and more complex sentence patterns. Copy the paragraph into the text box provided and revise it, using the techniques outlined in this chapter. Click HERE for a sample answer.

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To create paragraphs in your essay response, type <p> at the beginning of the paragraph, and </p> at the end.







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