Revise the five sentences below into a unified body paragraph following the formula discussed above. Remember to begin with a topic sentence and make sure you use only relevant examples and details. Don’t include unnecessary information.
She has both a graduate and undergraduate degree from Stanford University.
Ms. Garcia has taught high school for twenty years in Los Angeles County.
Velma understands the problems teachers face every day.
She drives a convertible Volkswagen Beetle.
She has been an assistant principal the past five years.
Velma Garcia is the best candidate for high school principal.
